Feel For Faith ([info]feelforfaith) wrote in [info]slashababy,

Playing It Safe, for [info]littlemimm

For: [info]littlemimm
Title: Playing It Safe
Author: [info]empy
Pairing: Marton/Craig
Rating: R
Summary: All good things come to he who waits.
Notes: I took a few liberties with the schedules (wardrobe fittings and such) and nearby bars, but hopefully this doesn't mar the reading experience. I hope you enjoy the fic, Mimm!

Playing It Safe


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[info]feelforfaith

December 26 2006, 21:16:59 UTC 5 years ago

It's not a pairing I normally read, but the first paragraph cracked me up so hard, and I was hooked. I liked Craig's fumbling through his attraction to Marton, the subtle humor of it. And Marton was hot taking control of the situation. I liked it a lot. :)

[info]msilverstar

December 27 2006, 09:55:30 UTC 5 years ago

I do like this, Craig nervous and then the dominos tumbling one after another... (I'm also a big fan of sex, esp. first times, that don't involve penetration, so yay!)

[info]angiepen

December 28 2006, 12:45:07 UTC 5 years ago

Nice one. I'd definitely like to watch while Craig "atones" for being so slow off the mark. :)

Angie

[info]littlemimm

December 28 2006, 20:43:17 UTC 5 years ago

Holy Christ! The smut, it killed me.

Not to mention the pairing, which is one I just about adore (it's rare, but when it's done well it's lethal), and a few of my weaknesses you managed to include here. Like the use of movie dialogue, using the filming era, a character (in this case Craig) being uncertain whether the other one wants him, and that line between friends/lovers that gets a little confusing and frightening when crossed, and Marton's smiles and the touches, and the way he goes after Craig until he gets the guy, and handjobs... and rain. I love rain in fic.

Either you know me really well (I do have my suspicions...), or you and I just happen to like similar things. Or you're psychic, which I guess is always a possibility, although not a very likely one. :D In any case, I really, truly thank you for this piece of sex and general hotness that was waiting for me here. Guh.

[info]caras_galadhon

December 29 2006, 04:17:59 UTC 5 years ago

Mmm. That was beautifully written, evocative and erotic. Whomever you are, you have a wonderful eye for detail.

[info]vienna80er

January 6 2008, 19:40:05 UTC 4 years ago

Read it and liked it!
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