Feel For Faith ([info]feelforfaith) wrote in [info]slashababy,
2006-12-24 22:20:00
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Up and Down the Roads Going, for [info]kiltsandlollies

For: [info]kiltsandlollies
Title: Up and Down the Roads Going
Author: [info]apple_pi
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Everything feels like it's wrapped in clingfilm: one millimeter too far away, just a little too shiny, a touch too plastic.
Notes: Set just after filming, summer in the UK. Title from Walt Whitman, We Two Boys Together Clinging, in Leaves of Grass.

Up and Down the Roads Going


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[info]strongplacebo

December 26 2006, 18:29:26 UTC 5 years ago

I adored this story. The whole piece was infused with a sense of quiet and desperation, and the descriptions (the thin skin of Dom's chest, everything wrapped in cling film) were perfect.

[info]msilverstar

December 27 2006, 08:43:19 UTC 5 years ago

I love Billy outside, consciously breaking his mold, catching Dom by the ankle and falling down together.

[info]mirabile_dictu

December 31 2006, 01:12:43 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, this was dreamy and sweet. Just perfect.

[info]daydreambeleevr

January 5 2007, 21:09:54 UTC 5 years ago

"It's Glasgow, you just got indoor plumbing last month, so -"
I love how you have them joke and tease each other. That part, no matter what else has happened, is still the same for them, and it's just perfect.

plus I got the sense that Billy really couldn't wait to get Dom inside. He needed to be with him, right then and now.

but Billy is warm and his nose fits against Dom's neck, his hands fit on Dom's waist.
When everything else is out of whack, one thing in Dom's life still fits. I loved this.

Kerry =)
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